Thursday 12 September 2013

That One Thing

I know that sometimes, what I write isn't necessarily poetry but my definition of poetry includes expressing one's feelings and this is how I feel. Not always as poetic as a person may think poetry to be. 


The joy in doing that one thing
Where you forget everything else
Any tests, any problems, any stress
In losing yourself to something that is not harmful to you
Yet is still your drug
Something that you are positively addicted to
Think of the power in that one thing
That one thing that you would give almost anything to never stop
For one, that one thing may be taking pictures of early blooming flowers in cool mornings
Or speaking to huge, enthusiastic crowds
Or dancing to your favorite song
Or even simply reading a book
But in the end
It is
That one thing
That is our motivation
To just keep on going
To go to sleep at night to wake up to a brilliant sunrise
To keep on working everyday for seven straight hours
Or to just take another step forward
That one thing
That fuels us under the sun and lets us rest beneath the moon
That one thing
Making our day and keeping a smile on our face
Even on the gloomiest days
That one thing
Makes such a difference

6 comments:

  1. Wow. You make amazing poems every time. You really have a gift for this. I've been reading your posts for a while and I thought you should know they are really meaningful to me, this one especially. I can't wait to see more of your writing.

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    1. Thank you so much! If you don't mind me asking, how are they meaningful to you? If you prefer not to answer that, I understand.

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    2. I really like how you manage to put emotions into words and really communicate the points. The reason it is meaningful to me is because the emotion lets me associate the poems with things Im experiencing. This poem was especially meaningful because I've been spending a lot of time recently thinking about that one thing that one thing that keeps me going and this poem summed it up almost perfectly for me.

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    3. Thank you. That means a lot to me.
      Now if only I could do that for my English class.

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    5. Anytime, great work deserves praise, and your work is definitely great. As for you as for your English class, you'll have to figure that out yourself.

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